nags54

Guys! Part 2 of ‘the perfect meal’ is complete ... lemme know what you think :) positive and negative feedback always welcome x

SirSatanJr

Hey there!
          
          This is the Amazing Person award. Once you are given this award you have to send this to other amazing people who, in your opinion, deserve it just like you. Please try not to break the chain, even though nothing will happen if you do.
          
          ~peace and love~

envykun99

can u get my book springlove to be like ur book perfect meal.. by that i mean popular

Broliet

Preach 'ducking' preach @SirSatanJr
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Broliet

Preach 'ducking' preach @SirSatanJr
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SirSatanJr

@EnvyTaylor99  And I'm glad I came to the rescue, because damn. I read your first chapter, and take my advice from before , write more, but I have some other advice for you: EDIT YOUR WORK!! Your capitalization needs serious work, and taking short cuts on words? Just don't. You want to seem professional? Use real, FULL words. "Yea" isn't a word. Also, make a better synopsis. Longer, and more interesting. That'll hook the readers into following the story and wanting to know what's gonna happen next.
            In short, just do some major editing, and add a few thousand words here and there, and everything will be great! People will love it more!
            Another piece of advice? Follow. Freaking. Everyone. They'll see your story, and maybe want to read it! That's how I got here. That's how I do things. If that's not good enough, then I'm ducking done so this.
            Happy editing! :D
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