naimmurrell

uploaded some new poetry, view and give feedback .

naimmurrell

hello guys, I'm new to wattpad . When I wrote my poems , I wrote them as a description . So when you read, them they will be in the description . I plan on fixing them, I don't want anyone to get confused.

ChayAvalerias

@Tegan1311 Hi @naimmurrell, welcome to Wattpad!  Definitely want to read some of Tegan's work.  I'm finally (Thank God for Christmas break!) getting to reading some of her work.  Very engaging stuff.  
            
            First, thanks for the follow.  That's cool.  I am not sure what stuff you like to read.  So, some of my work may or may not appeal to you.  My current project, "The Last Ticket to Fairfield," is moving along at a steady pace.  I don't anticipate getting that done until March.  So, you might want to wait a little bit before you start reading.  The book will be around 80-100k words.  I'm at about 60k words now.  So, I'm definitely over the mid-point.  
            
            About poetry!  I used to write a ton of poetry.  Throughout my entire college years, I exclusively wrote just poetry.  In fact, I have begun collecting some of the poem's I've written over the years and plan on posting them on Wattpad next month.  (This collection will be about love and relationships.)  
            
            Giving feedback on poetry can be difficult.  As a poet, revising a poem is also hard, especially when the poem is too fresh.  I favor concrete images rather than just abstract ideas or concepts.  The concrete image should convey the abstract (feeling, mood, emotion).
            
            I'd be happy to look at some of your poems after you put them into the book part.  Also, you might just put them all into one collection book and make each poem a section.  But for now, I am enjoying Tegan's work. C.A.
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