MuddyMarble

I would like to make a suggestion, you can ignore it, I dont mind. I was reading your story for a bit, I noticed there were lots of spelling/grammar errors. This might scare away possible readers, so I want to help. There are reasons I'm sure, I myself struggle a lot. I would like to provide you a resource you can use. You can copy/paste it into a spelling/grammar checker. You can ask someone. Or maybe you dont what to, that's fine too. You are entitled to your own opinions, I won't change that. Some online spelling/grammar checkers can be intimidating on first use, that's ok! My first time using one was hard too. If you find one thing just isnt right for you, you can find another. There is plenty of free checkers out there. I myself was introduced to these things in school. You however might not have had that. That's ok. I'm telling you this because I want to help. If you find none of what I'm telling you fits you, the internet is a great source to find new ways of fixing the grammar and spelling. I hope you find my comment helpful. I hope you have a wonderful day!

nalulover257

@MuddyMarble thank you so much;yes I understand I have made spelling/grammer mistakes,especially because I did this when I really wasn't that experience with these things. That and I really did this story for fun cause I really didn't think this story would go far and a lot of people wouldn't see it. And once I saw I was getting so much reads it got to me so I just wrote a little bit and didn't take the time to check any of the grammer at all clearly . But I'm in high school and my teacher has helped me a lot with my writing and now I'm trying to write a lot more and take the time to check if the grammer/spelling is correct and hopefully more people like you can help me along the way cause I honestly want to give my readers the best experience they can have while reading this story, and I'm always open to anyone's suggestions. I hope you have a wonderful day! ♡
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AndresValderrama401

can i ask something

nalulover257

@AndresValderrama401 yes I will I was going to do a chapter in December but some stuff happened so I decided to hold it off and I have been really busy so right now I'm just trying to find a day were I'm free and make my chapters more longer and detailed
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AndresValderrama401

@nalulover257  you will continue with your story of Lucy as daughter of kakashi
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