Sm_dreamer

Thank you so much for the votes! It makes me so happy to know that you are enjoying 'The Rogue Immortal'. Your support gives me a lot of motivation to keep writing. Thank you for being a part of this journey!

Sm_dreamer

@namiaa11 
            Thank you so much
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namiaa11

You're welcome, I hope your work goes smoothly and you always have success
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Sm_dreamer

Hello! Thank you so much for your lovely comment and for the vote. It truly makes me happy to know that you appreciate the structure and the plot of my story.
          ​Regarding the 'happy ending' you mentioned, I completely value your sentiments. The journey of the characters in 'The Rogue Immortal' is not an easy one, and I have planned a very special path for them. I can only say that whatever they lose or gain in the end, it will be complete justice to the story.
          ​There are many twists coming up in the future chapters that will surely surprise you. Please stay tuned, as this journey has a long way to go! Thank you once again for your support. Have a wonderful day!

namiaa11

My pleasure, I will wait for the continuation of your story, sorry if it takes a long time to continue reading your story because I am busy studying & working. Keep up the good work
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Sm_dreamer

Hello namiaa11, 
          Thank you so much for following me ☺
          I’m a student and have recently started writing a BL novel titled 'The Rogue Immortal: Bonds of Blood.' Since I’m still learning, I would really value the opinion of an experienced reader like you. Could you please give it a read and let me know if there’s anything I could improve? Your feedback would be a huge source of motivation for me. Thank you so much!

namiaa11

Ohh hello
            
            You're welcome, sorry if my English is messy. I'll read and understand your story, but I prefer a story with a happy ending for the main character. Sometimes I can feel sad for a while if a story ends tragically.
            
            And as a reader in general, I'm very uncomfortable when an author's writing is messy (paragraphs, punctuation, etc.). It makes the reader dizzy, even if the story idea is interesting. I'll immediately abandon the story and never read it again.
            
            I've skimmed through your story and found it to be a good idea. The paragraphs, etc., are well-structured. As for the plot, it depends on how you develop it. Too much conflict  sometimes can be frustrating or even boring. It would be more exciting if there were a plot twist the reader wasn't aware of. 
            
            Sorry I typed too long, hope it works^_^
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