nani91

Hey

Aetila

Hey there! 
          I'm new to Watt pad, and I was wondering if y o u could read one of my sto ri es and comment on it! (voti ng , f anning, and whatever ar e a ll o ptional, its the revi ews I nee d!) I'd love to retu rn the fav or, and I will! 
          I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything i s greatly appreciated! Thanks f o r reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was j u st your typical Hawaii tra ns pl ant to Manhattan, obsess ive to p student who actually pro cras tinates everything, and b ound of Ivy; future care erist and c urrent fortune tel ler. U ntil-- that is--she fin ds out everyth ing she aced is more o r less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and strivin g socialit e--and hell o demons layer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--t hat is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome t o a world where elves,well, a re n 't your fairy tale elves. Ru le d in a ochlocracy, of O liga rch s and tech savvy mega­corpo rati ons, of underworld crimin al ru le, resistance in this m obocra cy is futile wh en your King ca n be your dish washer i n one da y. Intergala ctic best seller an d future O ligarch, K ronos fød t av Mø rke’skala soon finds out ho w his fickl e world migh t cha nge--with his help too.

graceluck

Hii (K) 
          
          I was just wondering if you could please check out my story - In the World of Women.
          
          Here’s an excerpt from Part 1:
          
          In my world faith is pretty hard to come by. When my own mother took away the most promising aspect of my life I learned the hard way that people always disappoint you; when my prayers at night went unheard, I stopped believing in God, or even anything remotely associated with God: miracles, visions, angels... you name it, anything with a hint of the supernatural and I’d be the first to scoff at it. I believe you (or if you’re unfortunate enough, those around you) control your fate, not a bearded man in space; I believe you through love, make the miracles happen; and I believe that if it’s a vision you crave it’s your imagination that’ll come to your aid (and when that’s a scarce resource... I could always count on Lucy). However, had anyone asked me what I’d thought of angels I’d have described to them, in perfect detail, the girl standing on those cracked stone steps, one hand held books, papers and folders and the other held her map, upside-down. 
          
          (I've just started out and this is my first attempt so I'd be extremely grateful for any feedback at all )
          
          Thanks ;) 
          d4l 
          xxxx

Dark-Beauty

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my first attempt on a Greek story. I decided to write about something new on wattpad instead of another vampire story even though we all love them (although it does include them but in a totally different context) I would love some feedback, criticisms welcome 
          
          It’s called: The Immoral Darkness 
          
          Cassie has watched the entrapment of her mother before her eyes from the very people she lives with…Greek Gods. Since that night, a lot has changed; she finds out that she is the reincarnated Greek goddess Aphrodite who is now on the run from the most powerful being…. Zeus. Aphrodite is the Greek god of love and a romance unfolds whilst her run from Zeus. She discovers many powers that endanger her at some points but she is Aphrodite, she somehow comes out of it unscathed. She is trying to go against the written prophecy, but will she leave the hands of her beloved citizens of an entirely different kingdom all to the rising darkness?

SilverLove

 I saw that yesterday when I came back from school. Now I'm back in fifth page :) 
          I probably need to update -glances around- :O
          
          Thank you for telling me and I adore the comments on the story, they brighten up my day! <3