I'm not gonna lie you have came a long way since your first book, the first book looks like a 9th grader wrote it but ya new book feels like a actually book I'll read in my English class lol
I try to read other writers but some just can’t rush their writing and be just writing scripts , while I was in college and I took a course for writing I had to learn the difference
I be seeing people my age who still write like a 9th grader so I’m glad i improved some stories on here have no real plot or drama so I don’t take the time to read them