napamuse

BERTOLTO FUBARRRRRRRR

napamuse

sometimes humans disgust me. How can a 14 year old boy stab a 13 year old girl to death and then proceed to have no remorse. #justicefortristynbailey

SuperBuffalo

@fatewriterB01 Yes. Speak the justice for Trystin Bailey. She didn't deserve such. The fact of the 14 year old boy having no remorse, just makes the matter worse and more disheartening. I can totally relate. I'm glad that you had had brought this up. #justicefortrystinbailey
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aerisroyale

Hello! I've been reading your story (the one I've commented on), and I see a LOT of grammatical errors. Therefore I wanted to know if I could be your beta reader? I would only focus on commas, semicolons, parenthesis, spelling, etc. And I'd also be open to giving you advice on your fanfic if you wanted some feedback to make it better.  So let me know if you're interested. 

napamuse

@books2lovers the fact that you emphasized- but on a serious note thank you, i think i could really use a beta reader because English is not my native language and it would be amazing to have some help (grammar wise)
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