narniarules123

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Hey lovelies!!
          	
          	I fucked up… so I realized I was rushing both chapters 1&2 for crown of dawn. I’m rereading it and realized there’s plot holes  so I ask chat gbt to help make a plan for continuing this story and help me gather what I want in the book…I have a good point so I might delete chapter 1&2 to revise it… if you see it goes down don’t worry I’m working on it…
          	-Lily

narniarules123

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Hey lovelies!!
          
          I fucked up… so I realized I was rushing both chapters 1&2 for crown of dawn. I’m rereading it and realized there’s plot holes  so I ask chat gbt to help make a plan for continuing this story and help me gather what I want in the book…I have a good point so I might delete chapter 1&2 to revise it… if you see it goes down don’t worry I’m working on it…
          -Lily

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Hey lovely’s,
          
          I’m struggling!!!!  For descendants of Dawn; I can’t decide if I should cut off at chapter 30 or 40. I need an opinion!Should I make  a series? Idk there’s like so much to unpack and I feel like it’s getting to long and boring where it’s like idk a lot of chapters… 
          This is for my ADHD readers or anybody really. If so what should I call the next book?
          Obviously it’s going to be…
          The Descendant of Dawn:(insert name)
          Or something like that…
          Any suggestions is appreciated!

narniarules123

Hello everyone!
          
          Long time no see! So as you can see, I’ve updated a lot of chapters and changes of my Book the descendants of Dawn. I’ve been writing slowly and surely throughout several months. Also making sure there’s not plot holes in it. I have a total of 15 chapters to upload and I’ve also been world building the story too! You should need all my notes in my note book. I have over 40 pages of notes lol. I also want to thank you for your patience, and support! I will most likely be siting on my Butt for my 5 day fieldwork next week since we got a new equipment for one of neighbors platoons. So I’ll bring my notebook and phone to try to update as fast as I can but won’t guarantee it.
          
          -Lily out!

narniarules123

Hi guys!!
            Fast update even though I updated about 2 hrs ago. I’m currently on staff duty so I’m writing right now as well. I currently on the roll for new chapters. Not 1 but positively 10 more chapters during my 24hrs shift
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narniarules123

Hello Everyone!
          
          I finally got this account back and running on my computer and I am very happy to tell you that I am back in business. Here's an update on Lilies life. I am Married now, with an amazing husband. He's not a reader but he said he wants to try reading more, especially with my over 100 book library that I have. I work with the government now so publishing any of my writing material is going to be hard but I am going to try for you.
          Thank you for everything, I have now 203 followers and I am so happy that you all are commenting and reading on my past works. I am trying to work solely on Descendant of Dawn or my Electic Touch. But my husband wants me to work on an AOS story where Peter Parker is Daisy Johnson's Adopted son text. He thought it was ready funny and now he's been bugging me about it.  Please let me know if you want me to continue it.
          
          Again Thanks a lot for everything!
          
          -Lilly

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@lovethyself2023 hi!! I do but it’s only up to the 2nd one. The others I’m no longer interested.  I saw the 4th one came out. I didn’t watch i as I don’t really have time to watch tv or movies anymore….
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lovethyself2023

@narniarules123 Hi Lilly! Long time no see! Congrats on your marriage! Also are you still into Zombies?
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narniarules123

Hello everyone!! 
          
          I published two chapters of Descendants of Dawn… I noticed nobody was reading it and I got curious so I want to publicize this story a little bit and this story will be the one I will be focusing on more then my other stories… I’m trying something new and different in my writing and my gf will be pushing me to finish this book and electric touch my OS (Original Story)
          
          I hope everyone is good and well and thank you for coming through my writing journey 
          
          Lily