natemcguire420

Should I turn hidden truths into a real novel?

wockstactrl

I love everyone’s favorite bachelor 

natemcguire420

@versace-draco Alright, I will make those changes to my next chapters. I really appreciate you taking your time to read it.
Balas

wockstactrl

@natemcguire420 , I love how professionally written it is , but I recommend only shortening the paragraphs a little.
Balas

natemcguire420

@versace-draco Thank you I appreciate it, and what do you dislike and like about it? Also do you have any suggestions
Balas