Naaaaaatt

Hi (K) 
          
          
          I was just wondering if you could please check out my story - In the World of Women. I've just started out and this is my first attempt so I'd be extremely grateful for any feedback at all.
          
          
          Thanks ;) 
          d4l 
          xxxx
          

 @marthe3103: I read I SOLD MYSELF TO THE DEVIL FOR POPULARITY AND BEAUTY. I hope you got my comment, but if not, I think the story line is great, and you have a lot of voice when you write. Upload soon :)

hi i'm wondering if you could take the time to read one of my stoies. i sold myself to the devil for popularity and beauty. its about a girl who's being bullied by all of her school. one time when brandon and his gang are chasing her she hides in a dead end and this beautiful man with violet eyes came so her and aske her if she would like popularity and being beautiful. he askes her to sign the contract but she hesitate first but then she thought.
          my life can't get any worse than it already is.
          
          turned out she was dead wrong.
          
          <3 thanks if you read

@LCMelendez: Hey Lizet, 
          Sure, I'd be more than happy to read one of your stories. Do you want me to read  a specific one or just anyone ?
          
          -Natyra