naudialove

yeah,this story was on another site,one mostly focused on that,I'm actually thinking of making the ones on wattpad a little more...clean. Roommates with benefits is the one that focus the most on such aspect,given the plot,it's normal,I guess,I guess you're right,I'll keep that in mind,THANK YOU for the feedback,it really helps a lot :) the other stories have much less of those scenes (if you don't count betweent past and future,but I'm gonna have to edit that soon enough. Thanks again :)

Thing*

@TheWritingWolf1 I really enjoyed roomates with benefits there were really no spelling or Grammer errors that I could see but tbh writing/English isn't really my best subject. The only really I didn't like we're all the sex scenes, it's good to have them but not to much I feel that their love story should've developed more in the book not just by sex but by talking. I understand the whole benefit thing but they still could've been friends that developed a better bond together