nduta_joy

@Cupidsarrow44 Baby,I love you more!
            Miss you so much!

@nduta_joy Thank you so much for this thorough and awesome feedback :D I'm glad those things got through my writing and characters. Things will get pretty intense at some point. I hope I'll get that right when the time comes :)
            
            And it is liberating for Steve in many ways. 
            The fact that you noticed that there's direct and ongoing communication between the two is liberating for me :D
            Thank you.
            And careful with being late for work o.o

@YuukaSumiko Hello!Well,I think this chapter was well-written.This is the first story where I'm reading some Bdsm and not feeling disturbed.Some authors who incorporate Bdsm in their stories tend to write what I think is rough sex,you know,like throwing him/her on the bed,rip off clothing,tie him/her up,call him/her bitch or slut and have some rough sex with him/her.Okay,if he/she is into it,it can be fun but I don't think that's true dominance.You brought out true dominance in this chapter really well and I loved it.Its beautiful! Remember  when Steve walks towards jack?the way he went willingly with no hesitation?Steve enjoying every bit and we see him getting worried because his happiness is making Jack happy and I loved that.Also,I noticed the way you made sure there's direct and ongoing communication(jack asking Steve what he wants scene..that was so hot!)and that's one of the key beauties of Bdsm that makes it particularly satisfying ,which you brought that out  so well since we see the wild inside Steve slowly revealing​ itself and giving it a voice and like he says,it's liberating.I love this chapter!
            
            Anyway,bad news,I'm late for work! We'll talk soon..as always.

@YuukaSumiko Haha I will!Oh,I am; seriously that guy's mean.Anyway,Goodnight!:)..(Or whatever time it is where you are)

@nduta_joy Tomorrow :D It's been a pleasure. Take care! *low* watch out for that watching court clerk...

@YuukaSumiko I'd love that,and so will I. That's such an honor!(though I barely know about writing and I'm sure I'll love every chapter coz your writing style is outstanding)Well, we'll talk soon :)

@MyLiteraryEscape And thank you for providing us such an amazing story!I'm obsessed with it!16?!I'm even more amazed.Keep it up!

GAHHHHHHH! I didn't see this because you didn't tag me >\\\\\\< BUT THANKYOU! That is too too too kind of words >\\\< im not all that! I assure youuuuuuu. I'm just a little ol 16 year olddd

Your writing is so beautiful!!Aedon is a pleasure to read,trust me.It seems that you go to some place within yourself where words live..I'm really looking forward to your next chapter

I'm really looking forward to it!You're an amazing writer.I'm actually starting to read  The Art of Sin at the moment before I head to bed.

Really? Awesome! ^^ I'm glad you liked it so much. The next chapter will be updated Sunday if you're interested 

@GaySensei I started to read that story and I found I couldn't put it down!