Hello dearest one first of all that is an amazing book cover. I was stunned!!
Secondly, I made some corrections based on what I know as a fellow writer for chapter 1. I don't know if you want corrections for each chapter, or just a general compilation at the end of the 18 chapters. Which would you prefer?
And lastly, where can I tell you the corrections? I'd rather not do it in the comments section. I don't want to seem like a pessimistic know-it-all (even though I'm not) lol!