Hey, if u want 2 rit a story then th@'s awsum. But if u want sum ideas and suggestions - then the most I can do is give you a story line - the rest of up to you and what you want to do with your story. Just try and be yourself whilst riting and don't go overboard. But then again - its ur story. As another writer once told me - keep your story flowing and don't cut it short. if u need to write like 19 pages then go ahead. just have fun whilst writing.