bounce!

I can relate to your problem, I'm always dissatisfied with my work that I keep going over it many times leading me to discover plot holes and mistakes but that is the fun about being a writer it makes you want to rewrite and do better every time you hold a pen or tap on a keyboard, trying to upgrade yourself and your works.
          I support your desires, I really liked this story thank you for your hard work. I hope you rewrite this story in the future, if you're willing to.

Just wanted to say that I loved your book!
          Hope you’re doing well!

Your story isn't bad. Greater than mine. Whenever I write my I always think about your story and that give me alot of hope to keep my writing. So please feel down about your story. Always keep hope so u can be better. Without trying there won't be no answer,so keep trying. One day u will be the greatest ever. U also can talk to me whenever u want. I'll always be there to be friend with u. 

Uh I wanted to ask u something. In your inso's law fanfic Park Lola is an oc right? What does she look like. You said she has blue eyes. Is it the girl form the cover page?