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and it's like  ...  ya know?          i'm trying to make something that isn't like, a, y'know, a classic who-dun-it. (i mean, it's like, my entire family's brand at this point,) but like, i need to switch things up, i think that like, revealing the “killer” mid-way through the book gives a lot of, y'know, shock? is that the right word?   and it's even more like, to throw the reader off, because y'see, he's not even the real killer, but he thinks he is, until the end, where it's revealed that it's the sister  ---     but i dunno, i think i need some thoughts on it,