:)

Also another suggestion is that yo put capital letters at the start of sentences and paragraph titles. Just when it's necessary. Again it's just a suggestion so it's fine if you don't want to take it :) 

Omg thx so much for writing the story although it's still in progress. BTW when will you update? Everyday maybe? Also I suggest that you change the First letter of names to capital letter because it might piss off people a little. (I'm one of them) but its just a suggestion anyways thx again for writing I can't wait for the update