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@xxCluelessxx @thelovelycat no problem. :)

Wow. Thanks for the fan! xx

Hey! Saw your post to the Fantasy Club and thought I'd drop by and see if I can interest you in my two fantasy novels. ;) They are both unique, well-written, exciting and one of them is even completed. Links below! Cheers - and good luck!
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/2561923-the-elgard-folios
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/2482439-the-incredible-bazza%27jo

Hey ^-^ thanks for the fan!

@TardisyTardis YEAH, WITH MY WHOLE HEART! 

hahhaha, de nada. :) 
          Looking forward to more updates. :)

@Thefeistyteenager oh gosh i never really thought about that. In Ranked i think it just comes with the territory. I wanted to expirament with the whole gang idea, but usually its very clichéd, so i took a serious aproac, and tried to be very realistic. And id imagine anyone who had seen or been through what Blaze had would be out casted too. For cliché? That is pretty much the whole idea of the book LOL. Its the reason i named it cliché. I tried to take teen ficiton an extremely overly-clichéd genre on wattpad and give it my own little spin. The whole idea of Danny and Carmen working together is very cliché, the nerd boy and the beauitful girl, but it totally works, which was the point. I guess its just me proving all of the people who say clichés are stupid wrong. And thank you very very very much hahaha. Im so happy you enjoy them! I didnt get any feedback for the first few months so km glad some people like them. :D

Hey, Just curious - Any particular reason why you picked outcasts as your protagonists in Cliche and Ranked? 
          (Totally awesome by the way) Imma be hooked. :3

Thanks a bunch. Im writing offa tablet and its notorious for capitalization errors, and im noticing everything your saying. Ill defedit it up. :)

. To start off with I first noticed your introducing sentence. I always look for something that will grab the reader and make them want to continue reading with the first sentence along with the closing sentence. More of your endings were good but i would work on the beginnings more. Also you had a lot of spelling, punctuation, and capitalization errors, and you seemed as if you were rushing through scenes, just slow it down some and add more to capture the reader. And also a problem that people have pointed out in my writings you also switch up past and present tense. 
          
          It wasn't cliché unlike the title says and you have unique characters other than the queen bee and top guy, but that’s normal to be found in a high school story. I'm liking the plot of this story and i think it could be really interesting. I'll give you 7.5 out of 10.