bruthermary
hi! i don’t mean to be rude or bother you or anything like that, but no one has read this book that i have kinda been wanting to write and i’m scared to continue to write it because if no one likes i, why even try? so it would mean a lot to me if you could read the few chapters that are out now, you don’t have to but it would mean a lot to me:) thank you
bruthermary
it helps so much! thank youu, it means a lot to me. i haven’t written it for a bit now because i felt like people wouldn’t like it but thank you, you helped me want to start writing it again:) and you are a great writer so i figured why not ask you for some help or advice. thank you again it means so much to me:)
nerdwithaphone
@bruthermary Heya! You're story is really good so far, i love the idea you have with the memories and the flow of your writing is really nice! I also really love the fact you chose diabetes and not some other illness that authors use alot. Its unique and the science behind it you added made it really interesting to read about. The end to the third chapter had me a little shocked and scared for her, which is what you wanted I'm guessing so you've got a lot of ways the story can go now! I'm really flattered you asked for my advice because I remember thinking the exact same things as you about writing, you just have to go for it and think that for every one person that doesnt like reading it, 10 people will! Hope that helps!