@nerdygrl01
This is just friendly criticism your book doesn't have any punctuation so it makes it really confusing and hard to read. I will just go through it and add quotation marks where the people are talking and punctuation point and then I think you would be easier to read and I understand. Otherwise that has a really good storyline never give up on your passion for writing.
hey guys i really need your guys support i am gonna be coming out with my book hopefully soon i will most likely come out with the trailer first and when that comes out ill post the link but i need your guys support i need you guys to message me leave comments recommend vote stuff like that so i know you enjoy what i am writing or eles ill end up deleting my stories thank you guys and love you all so much
hey guys i am glad to say i am now writing a new book and if all goes well maybe just maybe i create a equal but with this story can you guys please recommend this book to your friends and your followers because that would be amazing i wanna get this book up to a good amount of readers and this time i am gonna do something were i am gonna need a pacific amount of reads or votes to continue because if i feel no one really likes it i am gonna take it down okay? and dose anyone know how to make those traliers so i can post it on my youtube channle? and if anyone makes youtube videos whats the best app or website to edit your videos?
@Cynthiamarie550 hey
Hi
anyone like my angle so far?
