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YamiVerma
Hey....I just started writing my first book and I was hoping you could give it a read and give me suggestions of how I can improve. It would mean a lot.
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nerdymind
@YamiVerma I would love to read your work! Though I'm not very sure whether I'm the right person for improvement suggestions since I myself am only one book old. I'll leave comments nonetheless.
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