njhxaf
check out my story if you want and let me know what you think! thanks have a great day ((:
nessa_74
@njhxaf I love the concept of your story it has amazing potential I can't wait to read more and if you were to make any edits I would just say shorten the middle little bit because it kind of repeats things but it's not over whelming so it wouldn't be a bad thing if you left there just some thoughts of mine. Also I will be posting a story of my own shortly and would love if you could add some comments to mine as well. just let me know if that's okay have a punk rock day!