please coment on my message board if you like the pragraphs called :chapter whatever and roling down the hill, from the story mr player dont try to use me coz they were my ideas and i did that for my friend tomakefame1212 so yh and also if you need help writing a chapter fan me and send me a message or ask on my message board so really thats all  fan and u can ask for ideas for ur story or just write it on my message board....................
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