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As Peter saw Valeria's head fall from her mangled body a unknown victim at first of her own godfather Doctor Doom's attack Peter felt something in him break. Peter let out not a scream but something more like a roar as a power erupted from his body for the second time.  the last time this happened was when he found that Mephisto had his three daughters souls Anne, May, Leah.  Peter had beaten Mephisto down that it looked like all his bones where broken.   Now the power was coming out again.    When the golden burning glow had dimmed  Doom and the X-men, the avengers saw Spiderman holding Valeria her body restored.  Valeria stirred in Peter's arms and slowly opens her eyes.  "Uncle Peter?" ask weakly before passing out.   Peter walked over to Sue and  Reed handing Valeria to her parents. Sue held tight Valeria crying.  Peter looked at Doom After the that sound he made before he has not said a word.    
          	
          	Doom could not move what ever had happened to Spiderman had changed everything. He was Doom the Sorcerer Supreme he was invincible, and yet looking at Spiderman with that burning golden glow Doom felt a dread to his very core.  It was almost if he had become a grain of sand looking at the universe.
          	
          	Peter took a step and was instantly in front of Doom grabbing him by the face and slamming Doom into the so hard that he made a crater from the impact.   
          	
          	This is just something that came to mind after I saw a video about the ending of the latest Doom comic.  What do you think?

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As Peter saw Valeria's head fall from her mangled body a unknown victim at first of her own godfather Doctor Doom's attack Peter felt something in him break. Peter let out not a scream but something more like a roar as a power erupted from his body for the second time.  the last time this happened was when he found that Mephisto had his three daughters souls Anne, May, Leah.  Peter had beaten Mephisto down that it looked like all his bones where broken.   Now the power was coming out again.    When the golden burning glow had dimmed  Doom and the X-men, the avengers saw Spiderman holding Valeria her body restored.  Valeria stirred in Peter's arms and slowly opens her eyes.  "Uncle Peter?" ask weakly before passing out.   Peter walked over to Sue and  Reed handing Valeria to her parents. Sue held tight Valeria crying.  Peter looked at Doom After the that sound he made before he has not said a word.    
          
          Doom could not move what ever had happened to Spiderman had changed everything. He was Doom the Sorcerer Supreme he was invincible, and yet looking at Spiderman with that burning golden glow Doom felt a dread to his very core.  It was almost if he had become a grain of sand looking at the universe.
          
          Peter took a step and was instantly in front of Doom grabbing him by the face and slamming Doom into the so hard that he made a crater from the impact.   
          
          This is just something that came to mind after I saw a video about the ending of the latest Doom comic.  What do you think?

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Ok I had a crazy thought I would like your thoughts on. Now you may have heard that Jean Gray has merged with the Phoenix, and Storm can now become The Eternal Storm when she wants. that got me thinking about Spiderman and if he could use the Web of Life and Destiny why would he not use it to much?  Well first Peter is a street level hero by choice so the people know they can ask him for help, so he would not need to use the power much there, But if he did need to I think Peter could only use it for a short time like 15 minutes max.  the reason for this is unlike the Phoenix, and the Eternal Storm who's powers only come form that universe, and time line, Peter when he uses the Web of Life and Destiny he is getting power and strength from many universes, and time lines putting a lot of stress on him, and as his connection as the center of the web grows the more he gains access to more universes, and time lines. while it gives him tremendous power and strength the stress it takes on his body and mind is a heavy toll. I think that would also make a good opening for why Peter would need a good wife and partner in his life to help him with the stress on his body and mind. But what do you think?

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At the same time it would also open up for others to heard or see this new power, and look for who has it. like Hydra, A.I.M., Doctor Doom, and others. As Peter can't use it for very long he must find ways to ether hide it or use it sparingly as he learns how to use it properly.  To slightly use Dinobots quote from Beast Wars.  Peter's Power when he uses The Web of Life and Destiny is infinite and yet let limited, as there is no one including Peter knows what Peter can't do with the The Web of Life and Destiny's Power. But he can only use it for a short time, and who could Peter trust to help him with this. As Madame Web, most of the web warriors, and many in marvel have turned their backs on Peter.   On a side note I thought it would be interesting if Peter discovers when he goes to hell with Doctor Strange to get his brothers souls back, (This would explain why Ben has been such a ass) But there Peter not only finds his brother's souls, but also the souls of Mayday, and Anni.  this shock would make Peter use the power of The Web of Life and Destiny for the first time, and beat Mephisto up very badly, but after he leaves with Doctor Strange, and his brothers ,and daughter's souls Peter collapses when they get back as the power form The Web of Life and Destiny pushed Peter's body well past his limits.
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Ok I had a crazy idea.  I was watching Kaiju No.8, and thought what if after stopping the major Kaiju that they are fighting in the manga.  The Kaiju sends Kaiju No.8 to the world where the one who made the first Kaijus that started all the others.  the world that Kaiju No.8 goes into is My Hero Academia.  Kaiju No.8 will find out that he is younger here.  How will Kaiju No.8 deal will the worlds hero's what would be the effect of him going into this new would.

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I have a Spider-man Idea that I would like you opinion on.  What if Peter found out that the MJ that is with Paul was a clone, and Pail killed the real MJ as she was loyal to Peter.  no one believes Peter that Pail helped kill off his old world and killed MJ and cloned her.   Peter reaches his breaking point and stips being Spider-man and leaves.  Like in most storys when Peter leaves New York goes to shit, but this time a strange new spider shows up, and this one kills. Now this spider does not kill muggers and the likes but beats them up and puts meany of them in the hospital, but the bigger threats like killers ans so this spider kills.  This spider was a secret project of SHIELD, but it was stolen by HYDRA. who knows whos side this new spider is on as this spider make the public lose trust in the X-men, Fantastic Four, and the Avengers by reveling the Tony Stark, Reed Richards, and Charles Xavier know that Otto was in fact in control of Spider-man's body, and are a group called the Illuminati that is trying to control the world.  just who is this new dark spider and what are their plans?

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@Shadowreaper98 I also have a idea for another Spider man story.  would you mind giving me you thoughts on it as well?  spider man leaves New York feeling that he has nothing left to lose.  A few months go by and crime skyrockets and the Avengers, X-men, and the Fantastic Four are getting there asses handed to them by spidey's rouges.    Then Anansi  show up and takes away madam webs powers, while this does give her sight and old powers back. Anansi tells her that she was the worst guardian of the web and it's center.  Anansi brings back Cassandra and makes her Madame Web again, and lets her know that Peter is not only the center of the web, but also Anansi's reincarnation.  Anansi also lets her know that the Web of life is partially sentient and knows that Peter is in danger and will act to help him.  Ananis then goes back inside Peter.   The web of life brings six spiders that are the children of peter with different women, from different timelines.  Mary Jane is not one of the mothers as the web sees the pain that she brought Peter has made her a threat to Peter.  the six spiders are there to help and try to find their father.  the spiders bring to light the truth about spider-man, and how his friends and family failed him.  the six mothers of these spiders come to find out that one of them need to become Spider-man's wife but first they must find where Spider-man disappeared too.
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I have a Idea for a spider-man story.  spider man leaves New York feeling that he has nothing left to lose.  A few months go by and crime skyrockets and the Avengers, X-men, and the Fantastic Four are getting there asses handed to them by spidey's rouges.    Then Anansi  show up and takes away madam webs powers, while this does give her sight and old powers back. Anansi tells her that she was the worst guardian of the web and it's center.  Anansi brings back Cassandra and makes her Madame Web again, and lets her know that Peter is not only the center of the web, but also Anansi's reincarnation.  Anansi also lets her know that the Web of life is partially sentient and knows that Peter is in danger and will act to help him.  Ananis then goes back inside Peter.   The web of life brings six spiders that are the children of peter with different women, from different timelines.  Mary Jane is not one of the mothers as the web sees the pain that she brought Peter has made her a threat to Peter.  the six spiders are there to help and try to find their father.  the spiders bring to light the truth about spider-man, and how his friends and family failed him.  the six mothers of these spiders come to find out that one of them need to become Spider-man's wife but first they must find where Spider-man disappeared too.   I am terrible at whiting long storys, but you have made some amazing Spider-man storys.  Do you think you could make this idea into a story?

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@Arcanethescribe95 sure go ahead. I would like to see what you make from this idea.
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@newstory38 I'm tempted to make this into a story. Are you okay if I do? To be honest, this is an interesting concept, I've written a story that's similar to this but unfortunately I had an accident that nearly killed me and made me forget a lot of things. Some of which included my story plans, also my Google docs got corrupted. I'm trying to rewrite my stories and make new ones but it's a hassle. Anyways, tangent aside, I see potential in this idea.
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