I really like your story. Beautiful, I really loved how gentle yet heavy these scenes felt. The stillness worked so well, and I could clearly imagine the pauses and subtle expressions as I read. Do scenes play visually in your head when you write, or is it more about emotion for you?” I really want to know your way of writing these amazing stories.
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