If you guys think the story is going so smoothly that everything looks good, Keither is starting to feel for Bella, Hardin is just a side character, and Bella has already fallen for Keither......then let me remind you: the story is not even 15% completed yet.
The story is very long and twisted. In the upcoming chapters, the real darkness will begin, and some scenes will definitely be triggering. So tighten your grip.
And I will be increasing the chapter length, which is why it takes me time to write each chapter. So please be patient with me and trust the process.