Keep Away was a good book but to make it better I wouldn't fast forward so much because it just makes the book hard to understand plus there isn't enough description in each scene. Also you rush too much in the writing because there are paragraphs that could easily be half a chapter and it would give the book more depth and by make it longer with more description and information, people could actually understand the story line. So all in all, good plot and storyline but the book itself wasn't the best it could be. xox
