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@lexis_xx okay. so I just finished reading it ! I honestly think you need to edit it and fix grammar issues. it has great length, it's not too short. and I also think you should add a bit more detail. overall I think you're on the right track and it's got a good story line. but I need more! so update girl ! (: xx
@lexis_xx thank you so much for asking me! I feel special lol. I was actually looking for a new book anyway! (:
@mayceciliath absolutely love xx
Could you maybe check my story 'Broken' out? IT would mean a lot... THANKSSSSSSSS
