Nicole

So ironic how we have the same name & you work as a delivery nurse which is something I've been interested in for a while! Keen to do that when I'm older!

it's ok nics

Thanks so much for safe my story to you library! It means  a lot to me! I hope you  enjoy it
          Darla H

@SamRandomPop You edited out the words so I can't remember exactly where you put them.  Execrate is usually a verb and I think I remember it being used as an adjective.  It is also usually used to describe death but not always (english is so weird!).  Impudent usually is used to refer to a type of behavior - and again I can't remember where it was.  Its usually written as "his behavior was very impudent".   Neither of these words are very commonly used in everyday language and most people would not know what it means.  Hopes this helps you!  

Thank you for checking it out I really do appreciate your criticizing. I updated the chapter I did not do many changes (just the ones you told me about) :),
          but, I have a question you said that I misused the word impudent and execrate, could you please inform me how I misused it? :) 
          Thank you so much for editing it again you have no idea how glad I am :DD

heyy, I posted a new chapter it is not as good as the first one, so I would love your criticizing :)