Hi <3 before I get started, I must say that English is not my mother language so there will be some mistakes. Please don’t judge me!! Well, I never commented on the other fic before, but your fic is different. When I read “The Cursed One”, I was shocked because of how the story has been driving me over. You know like a roller coaster, the opening of the story I thought been like the other, so I was at the peak of the railroad, but then I plummeted and hit rock bottom. First, this is the most natural fic ever, I see how Cissa has desire when she looks into Noir's eyes. Cissa has realized her passion but she doesn’t let that emotion dominate her. Her feeling is very reasonable, which makes me more love this story. Second, you make the story have many surprising details. When I read how Cissa has the curse by Umbridge, I was like “This story has been too far… How did you do that to my Cissa” Ye, but with those details, you highlight how proud and strong Cissa is. You certainly create the real Black. Damnn, I’m not good at vocabulary, I can’t write to you how incisive I feel you just read your story. I have been losing sleep, everything about your story played over and over again in my mind, like a faulty film. Also, I have reviewed your fic in my mother language, and everyone loves your story too. Thank you for reading! Have a good day