Winsome24

Hey there.. Sorry for posting here without permission. I'm a new author, its my ff. Can you please look at it, and give me feedback, so I can decide whether to continue writing it or stop. It's my fantasy ever. I don't know how go it is. 
          
          It's a historical romance genre
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389150811?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Winsome24