nightfall_29

@GoodUndiscoveredGems Chosen Fate

charchris851

I only skimmed through your story, but it looked interesting and the script-like writing is definitely different (I've written scripts before, please don't take offense to this its just what your style reminds me of....) so kudos for creativity ✨

RachidaAnejjar

According to what you said in your bio, I may say I'm lucky you followed me back ;) haha !

nightfall_29

@RachidaAnejjar I'll look into your stories. I still have a lot on my list. When I'm finished with those, I'll look into yours
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RachidaAnejjar

@nightmoonfang It appeared and disappeared again! Seems that WP is going crazy! 
            Then you're not interested haha ;)
            You're welcome by the way
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ArcticKaturn

Thank you for the follow boo! Welcome to the snow bunny family xxx

nightfall_29

@ArcticKaturn It's ok. That's normal. Godbless on your writing.
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ArcticKaturn

Oh thank you! I hope you'll forgive my lack of editing past chapter 10 though; I'll have to go back and edit after it's all completed ^^ 
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nightfall_29

@ArcticKaturn Thank you for the welcome. Your story, Scrape, is already on my library. It seems pretty exciting.
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AlexisStClement

Hi Gian, thanks for the follow. I am glad you like my work. By the way, I like your profile picture xD xx

nightfall_29

@AlexisStClement Phi and Halia are the most dominant characters in the story. It's fine if you would focus on them.
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AlexisStClement

Oh thank you for your opinion. I had considered it the fact it could limit the point of view, but I will write from both Halia and Phi's point of view so hopefully will give a broader understanding. I am not sure if other characters (like Tönx or Haras) will have some chapters in their pov too :)
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nightfall_29

@AlexisStClement I like the the third-person narrative since it encompasses the point of view of every character that is present. But, writing in a first-person narrative is also a good idea since it would give the reader a closer understanding of the character being portrayed.
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