@nightingale67
Hi, sorry for dropping this here. Please can I have a minute of your time?
My name is Zillia, I’m a new author, and I’d really appreciate it if you could check out my new work titled “Trapped in the Allure of Sins.”
I’d love to hear your honest feedback. Thank you so much for your time ♥️
Hi, I’m Victor, a writer of complicated romance stories. Can you please check out my new work, Three Can Play, and give me your honest feedback? Thanks.
@nightingale67 Thank you!!! A feedback this detailed… I didn’t expect that. Thanks a lot. ❤️❤️
@K_M_Victor hey so I finished reading what you've published and I have to say it's rlly good! The actual writing is very detailed and leaves me wanting more. The characters aren't 2D they have real feelings and you put detail into them even the side characters! The plot is also good, with a forbidden romance and burnt out marriage. The ending so far has left me wondering what's going on with her marriage, will she get a divorce, and what's going to happen to their relationship. The FL and ML are rlly cute together and the Smit is also written well. Overall I think you're doing pretty good with the story
This is the link address https://www.wattpad.com/story/400424729-the-dark-dragon
Hi, I'm also an author & I'd like for you to read my book.
@Vyran16 no I'm sorry. I only stopped because in the first chapter i truly didn't understand what was happening
