nikilovescarrots

My birthday is coming soon , so I have some surprises for you guys!~

MoonlightEclipse5

I just read many of your stories and I have some controversial feedback ig 
          Your story ideas are nice but at one point it gets repeative and many of your stories have similar moments. The writing style is good, it seems like a.i sometimes but it's really good but you need more catch lines to grab attention.
          I don't mean this maliciously but just see potential for growth.

nikilovescarrots

Oh okay thank you!!! I’ll make sure to not repeat a lot and try for something different next time c: 
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