@Thiss_Chickk (sorry for the late response) It's fine- wee al have to start somewhere, ya know? Don't stress out over it; you try, which is more than a lot of people of there.
Keep going. You're great.
@Ae3qe27u Thank you so much for your advice , it will make me a better author !! And I might spell some things wrong because I'm only 12, but I try really hard not to. But thank you!! :)
Put down more about yourself! Likes, dislikes, Cut & Paste stuff, hates, etc.! A barren profile is uninteresting and makes you wonder why it's so vague/empty. You have 2000 characters of space! Use them!
Don't ask people to become your fan, especially in your profile. It comes across as fairly rude, not to mention a little needy, no offense.