Still I did not complete 119. Yet I can say 119 is a well written story. Considering lacking skill set of most the young writers, you have done it well. Language has handled well. Some stories full of nagging conventions and irritating to read. Even though characters are male they made them sound more like female characters in conversation. I appreciate you have maintained the proper tone of the conversation and the quality of the content. I usually am not well accepted by most of the authors due to my nature of strong criticism. So, if I sound more challenging, please consider it’s nothing new.
Any, well done. Good work.