hey there :) I was wondering if u could look into one of my work 'Hope' and give feedback or positive criticism to improve my writing better 
          would mean a lot , thanks !
          
          description 
          
          "You're gonna be happy", said life, "but first I'll make you strong." 
          
          Leigh Parker suffers from social anxiety disorder and depression due to her rough past . She hides her pain and suffering by acting strong and putting up a fake smile , hoping someone special could look past her sad eyes and accept for who she is . 
          
          Noah Xavier , a boy who sits at the back of the class hides deep secrets and doesn't find a single hope to go further in life.
          
          What happens when they cross each others paths . Can they save each other by giving hope or send them further the edge .