ninadayjay
ninadayjay
@VeronicaWyatt23 yes I do enjoy your book & I love how you always stop and leave cliff hangers. please follow back thank you and I will be checking your other books as well they look and sound interesting
_Kaylyn_
hey it's a nice start I enjoyed it so far some parts caught me in the beginning about her friend because I didn't know how old she was and stuff but I think when they talk you should put ("") quotation marks around it. And just make sure before you post you reread for any errors or mistakes but other than that it's good.
_Kaylyn_
@ninadayjay you're welcome and alright I might update today but yea you did put it in there but when you said that she had sex with her dad I thought she was young but then you put in there she was 24
ninadayjay
@_Kaylyn_ OK thanks for the feedback good advice I should of done that thanks a bunch !! I'm keeping up with your book also its pretty good ..... jazlyn is 24 BTW I should somehow put that I'm somewhere