SSbooklover

hey there Nina!
          tysm for d follow!
          pls do check out my book VEILed Destiny bound by blood and vote\comment and share it.
          it's on my other account SaraRima
          
          I read ur story and I really liked it!
          I totally dig the crush-on-bestfriend theme and plus u hav my fav ppl as ur characters
          I liked it

ninarose27

Aww thank you and I will be sure to check yours out right now!
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Barknoor

About your story...
          
          Criticism: You gotta recheck your capitalization and punctuation. I felt like the paragraphs were a little too long, so maybe if you just cut each long paragraph into two separate paragraphs to make it easier to read. 
          
          Not criticism: Sounds nice, I'm not exactly a big fan of high school stories but I will give the second chapter a chance :)

ninarose27

Thank you! I appreciate the help.
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