Hi Vonetta Liu,
I hope you're doing well! I'm reaching out because I’m looking for some feedback on my story, Threads of Deception, and I thought you might be the perfect person to give me some insight.
I’ve been struggling to get more views on my work and would really appreciate your honest thoughts on how I can improve it. I understand you might be busy, but if you have some time, I’d love for you to check it out and let me know if it’s something you think could resonate with readers.
I’ve reached out to a few groups already, but I haven’t received much feedback, so I thought I’d try connecting with writers like you directly. Any thoughts, suggestions, or even a quick review would mean the world to me!
Thanks so much for your time, and I’m looking forward to hearing from you. ✨
Best, Oyin
https://www.wattpad.com/story/385978950-thread-of-deception
