nneugz

I've started writing  a new story!   Quite different  from  Yin Yang  

nneugz

Ugh. So editing is taking a bit longer than I thought.  I showed this story to my boyfriend the other night and he says I need some more detail in the story.  So I've been trying to describe the scenery more and I also added a new character.  Please let me know what you think!

nneugz

Just started chapter 4.  I can't believe how quickly I finished chapter 3.  This story is a bit rough and from the prologue to chapter 2 was copied and pasted from google docs so I apologize if it looks funny.  Anyway, hope to have chapter 4 and 5 done soon and will be out of town this Saturday through next Saturday so I will not be doing any writing but will try to read some other works.  Please leave some comments.  Thanks!

nneugz

Wow!  I can't believe my story has 41 reads already! Please leave comments and honestly let me know what you think.  I just worked on chapter 3 some more.  Don't be afraid to give some suggestions.  Thanks!