Hi I'm Zulema,

Not a novelist but a screenwriter. So if you are having a hard time reading my stories read it as a if you were watching a movie or if your were a director. I'm just helping you paint the picture, that's how I see and write things. I don't write characters inner emotions. I'll leave that to your interpretation and imagination.  By the way I love critique, so if you have something to say, good or bad, let me know. I don't mind if it's bad. I just see it as a way to improve. Thank you.