soapyscph
just finished book in one sitting, all i have to say is make more books asap femdom too
noa_chorro909
noa_chorro909
yes it did take 20 days to write one chapter cause I kept editing the plan then forgot about it BUT I FINSIHED A CHAPTER
StarShine521
Happy New Year (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
noa_chorro909
WE GOT 40 OUT OF 40 OF THE CHAPTERS FOR THE NEXT BOOK PLANNED :D
And I did like deep planning so it should be better
but it's a male dom so don't get your hopes up guys :(
batman_w
Hiiiii
noa_chorro909
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Holy fuck 700k?!?!? Thank you sm guys genuinely dunno how this happened
JuzoWa
ahh i see thank you so much. it helped alot
JuzoWa
hi i loved your book , and i took a bit (alot) of inspo from it , id love to hear your feedback on the intro. thank you sm !!
noa_chorro909
@JuzoWa it's good but usually you should write the maybe first 5 chapters then publish them all so you get readers and it's a lot a of description when some of it should be left for the reader to figure out themselves cause thats what helps a story become interesting
gkkw3882
Your book was deleted???
noa_chorro909
GUYS IM SO DUMB ISTG I was gonna include Alex's dad in this chapter but forgot he was dead
