I am looking for feedback particularly on part 2 with Edmund and Brahld. I am hoping to give a connection to the reader from Aspen's feelings as she awakens to a confusing and new world.
However, was it too much information to handle? Was it too much revealing and foreshadowing? or was it just right? I feel this is the actual interaction Brahld and Edmund would have, so I wanted to stay true to that fact. I may reveal this chapter later, to better prepare for a information bomb of a chapter I feel that it is.
Thanks!
