nobodylikes92

After reading so many of these smuts...I'm beginning to wonder...y'all don't think all sex is this...violent...do you??

liampayne12302

@nobodylikes92 I dont think we do it's just I feel like they always write it and describe it like that cuz its wat most people write it as but I have read to more fluffy smuts and they weren't bad I hope more writers can write some more genuine "lovemaking or sex scenes ya know I think it be nice to just be a bit more real ya know
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nobodylikes92

After reading so many of these smuts...I'm beginning to wonder...y'all don't think all sex is this...violent...do you??

liampayne12302

@nobodylikes92 I dont think we do it's just I feel like they always write it and describe it like that cuz its wat most people write it as but I have read to more fluffy smuts and they weren't bad I hope more writers can write some more genuine "lovemaking or sex scenes ya know I think it be nice to just be a bit more real ya know
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nobodylikes92

Okay okay...
          CAVERN needs to be deleted from every authors vocabulary. 
          
          It's not a sexy word guys. It's just not. It makes the best writing turn 3rd rate. The writing is all good and then...WHAM. Killed it.
          
          PLUS there are so many other descriptions to use instead. 
          
          This is just my opinion...but please.