nobodywillknowthis

Due to chapter on being too long I decided to cut it into parts instead!

nobodywillknowthis

@nobodywillknowthis Nope not yet I'm still writing it but I ensure you that I'll release it to day!
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weirdlyincredible

@nobodywillknowthis because if you have i don't think it's showing it for me it only says you updated old chapters 
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nobodywillknowthis

@weirdlyincredible @weirdlyincredible Ok her he is
          
          Name: Rayker.
          Species: Tuxedo Cat.
          Pendant: Red dragon () or this emoji
          
          What he where's: black hoodie with a open zipper accompanied with a white tank top underneath and dark gray pants along with his pendant.
          
          He's 6.4 height, he's bisexual and has a secret that nobody knows about... He likes taking to him self a lot.. I mean a lot! Only when he's alone and he has depression... But he tries to hide it acting like he's fine but he's literally dying inside. He has more like a I don't want to die but also don't want to live types of vibe. 
          He's usually found to be too attached to his phone! He basically uses it almost every day. He more of an indoor person but doesn't mind going out side for a change... He acts pretty awkward to people he doesn't know and doesn't acknowledge people that he finds to be hostile to him, he's a pacifist at in the outside but if you managed to break that.. let's just say it was good knowing you. And he loves drawing listen to music he likes in the moment and playing too much video games like COD Roblox and especialy Minecraft and he watching YouTube, he's favorite colors are Purple, Dark green, Orange. He has an aloe Vera sent. 
          He knows how to play some sports like chess, badminton, checkers.
          
          He's very skilled with a spear or a longbow/staff in combat and a bow too.
          
          If you want me to give you more info about him just say ok.

weirdlyincredible

Heeeey I'd love to hear about you're oc and my snap is weirdteen :D

nobodywillknowthis

@weirdlyincredible would you like me to explain it here instead.
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nobodywillknowthis

@weirdlyincredible Hey just sent you a friend request there.
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LuckySpencer04

@nobodywillknowthis don't worry about fixing Grammer issues in msgs lol. I usually suck at Grammer and I only try while writing. Idk really what tips to give you. To help what do you think are the top 3 weakest parts of your writing and I'll hopefully have advice on how to improve on those. Also in my new chapter I wanted to do something different so the whole thing is 3rd person!

LuckySpencer04

@nobodywillknowthis my name on discord is luckylluuma
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LuckySpencer04

@nobodywillknowthis also I'm pretty sure we are in way different time zones lol
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LuckySpencer04

@nobodywillknowthis I just started reading your story and so far it's great. Also I wanted to thank you for liking my story enough to read it twice. If you ever want advice or wanna talk in anyway feel free to @ me. Have a good day!

nobodywillknowthis

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@KadenTheFox Fuck Yeah!!!  BRO'S Cooking To Night!
            
            
            
            Really though I am super excited! Can't wait to read it when it releases ❤️
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nobodywillknowthis

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@KadenTheFox Sorry for the late reply 
            I was busy doing something...
            Anyways, I'm so glad you liked it❤️
            I have been reading your story and your boyfriend's story for the past 6 moths now and I say they're are Amazing!!!
            
            And the way you write the emotion in you chapters are insane!
            Like when bobby faced dogday and she was saying shit about him right in his face, made me stand up while reading it. Literally I was shocked (she's supposed to be the sweet on )
            And when I realized that Kath was abusing catnap, Boy! My adrenaline was kicking like I was about run a marathon.
            I can forgive Dogday's dad for killing Bobby, Hoppy and Kickin (they deserved it, those homophobic jerks). But trying to kill CatNap'd dad (bless his heart) I thought I Lost all Hope, the ending is something I didn't expect would happen this early. I hope you continue writing and make it even bigger!❤️ 
            
            Anyways thank you❤️ for reading my story, I also have another one but it's a bit different (maybe one day I'll post it), and thank you  for offering some advice in writing, I really need it. 
            Sincerely @nobodywillknowthis both of you have a merry Christmas  
            
            Ps: I started writing this 2 hours ago and it took me 1 Hour to proofread it.
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