Please give me feedback on Crestfallen. The last chapter seems to have fallen off the views so if you don't like what I'm writing, tell me and I'll listen to what you're saying. Write as many comments as you want and be harsh. Just remember that these first couple of chapters are going to be setting up the characters. Please tell me if you're not a fan of the different perspectives or because after the first few chapters I can pick one character and stick with them if you'd like. Thank you so much and I hope you keep tuning in.
