redhots245

hey guys could you please check out my book determined I have the links to every  chapter below in order from first to most recent. I'm writing chapter 4 and could really use some inspiration:
          First chapter, The past - http://www.wattpad.com/89661219-determined-the-past
          Second chapter, Him - http://www.wattpad.com/91350872-determined-him
          Third chapter, Loki - http://www.wattpad.com/91849358-determined-loki
          Fourth chapter, Not an update - http://www.wattpad.com/94443233-determined-not-an-update
          thank you guys so much! I'm writing the next chapter right now, and I need some more insight! I don't do sugar coating I'd prefer it if you guys were as honest as possible about  the book. Could you please vote for each chapter and leave a comment on what I could do better, what I should do, What you loved, And even what you hated. Thank you so much and hope you have a great day!!