Hi! I am so sorry, but I was wondering if there's a way for the entire manuscript can be reviewed for grammatical errors? The plot is interesting, and I am not sure if this was written in your native language & translated. But, a lot of tje English grammatical errors reduces the essence of your story, which is sad. I was hoping the grammar, sentence structure can be polished for English readers - either run it via ChatGPT, or Claude or Gemini. Otherwise, I can offer my copy editing servicing for free if you like. Thank you!