MatiasEspinozaCueto

Hey, I have a suggestion for you: when you make the chapter "Alone with the Enemy", you could have the Highbreed woman, instead of staying on that desert planet, join and accompany the protagonist's team (so that the Highbreed woman has character development, develops her feelings towards the protagonist and changes the racist ideology she has during the course of the story)

MatiasEspinozaCueto

@noobmaster69790  Well, what you've said has left me wanting to know what you have planned for Reine and the rest of the story. Well, we'll have to wait.
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noobmaster69790

@MatiasEspinozaCueto she'll be way different when she makes her return in the seasons ending. Also, in Voided chapter, you're gonna have your mind blown when I show you new things and change your perspective when I do the next season or the movie.
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noobmaster69790

@MatiasEspinozaCueto her character development is changing. Also the while racist ideology was kinda a sex fetish or kink. The protagonist basically likes it when women demands more.
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alonne729

Hey man your stories are awesome to read, i remember in one of your Ben 10 chapters you were wondering if you should do a chaquetrix story. I think you absolutely should since it would be awesome and hot, anyway keep up the amazing work man, can’t wait for more

DXDAlbion

For your new sotry suggestion are you wanting a ben10 related story or something new

DXDAlbion

Because whatever 1 you say will affect my decision
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DXDAlbion

@noobmaster69790 good or a bad ben
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noobmaster69790

Basically a Ben 10 related story but it doesn’t evolve with the Tennyson family.
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ELMatthew47

While I have yet to get to movies part beside RAT yet, when will you make a moment between Y/n and Hope? Your story make me like Hope (Charmcaster) beside the harem, surprisingly for me to feel this way, where those have moments of flirting and teasing but not finally romantic moments like Mason and Jannet does, even thought Mason is still learning, before having sexual moments between Y/n and Hope?
          
          In other words if what I said confusing you, when will you finally tie the knot between Y/n and Hope? I’m not asking to make it happen too, just wondering when will you finally tie it.

noobmaster69790

@ElMatthew47 I’ll give the details after Ben 10 returns. You might like what Y/n had been doing in the next four years(besides graduating and finished college early). The teen team would basically disbanded and I’ll explain why in the chapter.
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ELMatthew47

Let me rephrase that, he lose forces by money and his Car just to clarify my earlier statement, Ben will do things to get better access to his Omnitrix which is why Y/n will punishment for Ben if what I said got you confused
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ELMatthew47

I don’t understand for the Chaquetrix, other than a different outcome and possibly, but, alright then. Also, we’re finally get to meet Kevin once again in Alien Force too, since he makes a return just like the original Alien Force series. Lots of questionable things Y/n punishment for Ben, same thing could be said for Gwen by Hope, while Y/n is making sure Kevin doesn’t loose force beside getting Kevin with Gwen, money, and this
            
            Kevin: Ah Man! What did you do to my Car!
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