DXDAlbion

For your new sotry suggestion are you wanting a ben10 related story or something new

DXDAlbion

Because whatever 1 you say will affect my decision 
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noobmaster69790

Basically a Ben 10 related story but it doesn’t evolve with the Tennyson family.
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ELMatthew47

While I have yet to get to movies part beside RAT yet, when will you make a moment between Y/n and Hope? Your story make me like Hope (Charmcaster) beside the harem, surprisingly for me to feel this way, where those have moments of flirting and teasing but not finally romantic moments like Mason and Jannet does, even thought Mason is still learning, before having sexual moments between Y/n and Hope?
          
          In other words if what I said confusing you, when will you finally tie the knot between Y/n and Hope? I’m not asking to make it happen too, just wondering when will you finally tie it.

noobmaster69790

@ElMatthew47 I’ll give the details after Ben 10 returns. You might like what Y/n had been doing in the next four years(besides graduating and finished college early). The teen team would basically disbanded and I’ll explain why in the chapter.
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ELMatthew47

Let me rephrase that, he lose forces by money and his Car just to clarify my earlier statement, Ben will do things to get better access to his Omnitrix which is why Y/n will punishment for Ben if what I said got you confused
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ELMatthew47

I don’t understand for the Chaquetrix, other than a different outcome and possibly, but, alright then. Also, we’re finally get to meet Kevin once again in Alien Force too, since he makes a return just like the original Alien Force series. Lots of questionable things Y/n punishment for Ben, same thing could be said for Gwen by Hope, while Y/n is making sure Kevin doesn’t loose force beside getting Kevin with Gwen, money, and this
            
            Kevin: Ah Man! What did you do to my Car!
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MariaIsabelRamosOliv

Your Ben 10 story is incredible, but there are some rude words and too much violence in some parts.
          I would have liked there to be two Omnitrixes between him and Ben.
          But the rest of this story is fine.

MariaIsabelRamosOliv

That part of the story hasn't arrived yet.
            I hope there are changes regarding the rudeness and violence.
            But I like your Ben 10 story.
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noobmaster69790

Well, thanks. How’s the Race Against Time part one?
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MatiasEspinozaCueto

It won't let me comment on the story, so I'm writing to you directly. I think there should be more shorts. I also wanted to ask if there will be more episodes before the classic series finale, and when Aya (the Mummy's ex-fiancée) will appear. I'm curious to know how she'll appear and how she'll interact with the main character.